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Sabtu, 25 April 2015
by Farida Nur I
I would like to apologize in
advance because I am sending this task using my email group, because I can't
use my email.
Elang Gumilang is one of the successful young entrepreneurs
in Indonesia. He was born in Bogor, 6 April 1985. He is the owner of Quarts Sand
Minning, the developer of Griya Salak Indah 1 & 2, Bumi Warna Sari Endah, and Griya Ciampea Endah. Although he lived in rich family but he want to got an
independent financial. His dream was produce 10 milion money for his tuition. So
he began her dream with sold donuts to some schools in Bogor when he was in
Senior High School. And he followed Java
Economic Competition in University of Indonesia and he won the competition.
Her father was a contractor, so didn’t impossible for him to try all types of businesses. Beginning in 2015, when he was a student at IPB . He bought a piece of land and built his first house. The capital is from joint venture with his friend during his high school and college. The house sold for 25 milion affordabe for middle class people. And than after his business was developing from sold one home, now he has already sell 2000 homes. And he can record the financial report more than 20 bilion per year. In college he also had done alot of business from sold fried oil, shoes, lobbied phillips firm for his university project, until established english language colleges in colaboration with her lecturer and some local businessmans.
Thank you. And please give me some feedback friends :-)
Hi guys..
BalasHapusI found some mistakes in your work.
First,the sentence, "Although he lived in in rich family....",I think it's double type "in".
Second, I think Elang Gumilang is male and you have used "he", so you must use "his" not "her".
And last, I found some wrong type, like "Univercity" and "businness", it should be "University" and "business", right?
Thank you :)
Thank you Sugeng for your feedback. This is realy help me to make my revision. :-)
BalasHapus