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REVISED WORK #2
By : Unknown
Present Tense
He eats fried rice everyday (He eats fried rice everyday.)
Present Continous Tense
She is catching a rabbit in the garden (She is catching a rabbit in the garden.)
Past Tense
They went to Tokyo last month (They went to Tokyo last month.)
Past Continous Tense
She was looking for her son who lost since one month ago (She was looking for her son who lost since one month ago.)
Past Perfect Tense
I had studied hard but I didn’t make good result in the exam (I had studied hard but I didn’t make good result in the exam.)
Past Perfect Continous Tense
I had been helping make a cup cake when my sister called me (I had been helping make a cup cake when my sister called me.)
Present Perfect Continous Tense
We have been living here for 3 years (We have been living here for 3 years.)
REVISED WORK #4
By : Unknown
Hi, my friends I want to tell you about Top Ittipat a young entrepreneur from Thailand.
He was a successful businessmen. When He was sixteen years old, He really likes played online games and forgot about his school. He knows about business of online gaming. In this games He can sell the weapons and He get a lot of money. But, this is an illegal business so the business doesn't last long. Then, his family has a lot of debt but, his father wanted him to collage. Top knows his father's debt and refused money from his father. Finally, Top can lecture by stealing his father’s amulet. And then, with the rest of the money Top starting a business DVD player. But, He had suffered a loss because it was fake DVD palyer. Next, Top not giving up and trying any other business. He tried selling peanuts with his uncle. When selling peanuts He progress by acquiring many of advantages. The business doesn’t last long because Top get a new problems. Top felt desperate and want to follow his mother to live in China. Here, He is trying to think about marketing strategy and He tried to open a new business that is fried seaweed. Failure always comes but He kept trying to be successful. And finally, a miracle is coming.
Now, He has over 2500 employees, and sent fried seaweed to 27 countries. And it’s revenue reached 1,5 billion bath (450 billion rupiah). With his revenue He can pay all the debts of his father.
REVISED
Hi, my friends I want to tell you about Top Ittipat a young entrepreneur from Thailand.
He was a successful businessmen. When He (he) was sixteen years old, He (he) really likes played online games and forgot about his school. He knows about business of online gaming. In this games He (he) can sell the weapons and He (he) get a lot of money. But, this is an illegal business so the business doesn't last long. Then, his family has a lot of debt but, his father wanted him to collage. Top knows his father's debt and refused money from his father. Finally, Top can lecture by stealing his father’s amulet. And then, with the rest of the money Top starting a business DVD player. But, He (he) had suffered a loss because it was fake DVD palyer. Next, Top not giving up and trying any other business. He tried selling peanuts with his uncle. When selling peanuts He (he) progress by acquiring many of advantages. The business doesn’t last long because Top get a new problems. Top felt desperate and want to follow his mother to live in China. Here, He (he) is trying (was trying) to think about marketing strategy and He (he) tried to open a new business that is fried seaweed. Failure always comes but He (he) kept trying to be successful. And finally, a miracle is coming.
Now, He (he) has over 2500 employees, and sent fried seaweed to 27 countries. And it’s revenue reached 1,5 billion bath (450 billion rupiah). With his revenue He (he) can pay all the debts of his father.
REVISED WORK#2
By : Unknown
1.
Present Tense
He eats fried rice everyday.
2.
Present Continous Tense
She is catching a rabbit in the garden now.
3.
Past Tense
They went to Tokyo last month.
4.
Past Continous Tense
She was looking for her son who lost since one month ago.
5.
Past Perfect Tense
I had studied hard but I didn’t make good result in the exam.
6.
Past Perfect Continous Tense
I had been helping make a cup cake when my sister called me.
7.
Present Perfect Continous Tense
We have been living here for 3 years.
WORK#2
By : Unknown
1.
Present Tense
He eats fried rice everyday
2.
Present Continous Tense
She is catching a rabbit in the garden
3.
Past Tense
They went to Tokyo last month
4.
Past Continous Tense
She was looking for her son who lost since one month ago
5.
Past Perfect Tense
I had studied hard but I didn’t make good result in the exam
6.
Past Perfect Continous Tense
I had been helping make a cup cake when my sister called me
7.
Present Perfect Continous Tense
We have been living here for 3 years
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Liza Ardiana Putri,
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