Writing Project C

I want to revise the task " work 2 " my group (14)

 I would like to revise work 4 about discribing businessman "Mr. Irwan Hidayat"

1. I very amazed knowing Mr. Irwan Hidayat.
   The correct sentence is  "I am very amazed to know Mr. Irwan Hidayat."

 2. he always give five billions every year for social care, such as free trip and let old employee to stay work in his company.
   The correct sentence is "he always gives five billions every year for social care, such as free trip and let old employee to stay work in his company.

3. The product of Sidomuncul are Tolak Angin, Kuku Bima, etc.
    The correct sentence is "The products of Sidomuncul are Tolak Angin, Kuku Bima, etc."

4. "he earns high omzet and can continuing his business until now."
     The correct sentence is "he earns high omzet and he can continue his business until now."

 5. but Mr. Irwan Hidayat never gave up to attend his business again by new stategy.
     The correct sentence is "but Mr. Irwan Hidayat never gave up to attend his business again by new strategy."

6. Mr. Irwan Hidayat continued his grandma’s business.
    The correct sentence is "Mr. Irwan Hidayat has continued his grandma’s business."

Thank you :)

I would like to revise work 2 about tenses.
1.  Past Tense
   Our boutique opened at 08.00 a.m.

   The correct sentence is "Our boutique opened at 08.00 a.m., yesterday."

2. Present Tense
    Everyday, a lot of customers come at our boutique.

   The correct sentence is " Everyday, a lot of customers come in our boutique."

3. Past Continous Tense
   We were starting our business while the other team also was starting their business.

   The correct sentence is "We were starting our business while the others team also were starting their    business."


Thank you :)

I'd like to comment about grammatical error for :

Group 12
Present Continous Tense

Past Continous Tense :
-We were starting our business while the other team also was starting their business.

Past Tense :
- Our boutique opened at 08:00 a.m.

Present Continous Tense :
- We are opening the boutique now.

Present Tense :
- Everyday, a lot of customers come at our boutique.

Past Prefect Tense :
- When the last customer came, the boutique had closed.

Group14:

Past Continous Tense :
-We were starting our business while the other team also was starting their business.

Past Tense :
- Our boutique opened at 08:00 a.m.

Present Continous Tense :
- We are opening the boutique now.

Present Tense :
- Everyday, a lot of customers come at our boutique.

Past Prefect Tense :
- When the last customer came, the boutique had closed.

1. Last monday, I have tried to write down my dreams. By that, I know that I still lack on grammar and the use of tenses. Also, I confuse when preposition will used on a text.
2. For more, I want to learn abot the 16 tenses, because I can't differentiate the use of each tenses.

Hello..
My name is Putri Ayuningtyas.I come from group 14.
My group consist of 3 members.there are I(Putri ayuningtyas),Sania Anggita Endah Kumara, and Kurnia Siti Nafi'ah.Our teacher is Mrs.Sri Utami.we learn english business with blended learning method.we will post our project in this blog,and we can comment the post of another groups.

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