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REVISED WORK#2
Feedback :
- It would be better if you add a title on each sentence, making it easier to be corrected.
- "We are students of the State University of Semarang"
According to me, You should not use the "s" at the Student, because the subject is the "We".
Thank you for all correction. I forget to add a title on each sentence, and i will give it. But, for sentence "We are students of the State University of Semarang" I think is correct. Because, "we" are plurar so I think we have to add "s" at word "student (Noun)".
1. Simple Present Tense
We are students of State University of Semarang.
We always come to the campus at 7 o'clock.
2. Simple Present Continuous Tense
Today is Tuesday. We are studying tax accounting.
3. Simple Past Tense
Yesterday was Monday. We studied English for Economic.
Miss Uut asked us to do our exercises.
4. Past Perfect Tense
We submitted the exercises on her table, after we had finished it.
5. Past Perfect Continuous Tense
Miss Uut was walking when we submitted our exercises on her table.
- "We are students of the State University of Semarang"
According to me, You should not use the "s" at the Student, because the subject is the "We".
Thank you for all correction. I forget to add a title on each sentence, and i will give it. But, for sentence "We are students of the State University of Semarang" I think is correct. Because, "we" are plurar so I think we have to add "s" at word "student (Noun)".
1. Simple Present Tense
We are students of State University of Semarang.
We always come to the campus at 7 o'clock.
2. Simple Present Continuous Tense
Today is Tuesday. We are studying tax accounting.
3. Simple Past Tense
Yesterday was Monday. We studied English for Economic.
Miss Uut asked us to do our exercises.
4. Past Perfect Tense
We submitted the exercises on her table, after we had finished it.
5. Past Perfect Continuous Tense
Miss Uut was walking when we submitted our exercises on her table.
REVISED WORK #4
Bill Gates
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Bill Gates was born on October 28th, 1955 in Seattle in a family having rich business, political and community service background. Bill was the second of three children in an upper-middle class family. Bill Gates as a child was very competitive, curious, and depth thinker. His parents decided to enroll him in the private preparation school, Lakeside School. Bill Gates is one of richest men in the world. Bill Gates was the founder and first chairmen of Microsoft, a global software developer and Internet technology provider.
I knew him because everyone talking about him. And I have read a book about him. And I'm sure that everyone know him because Bill Gates is the one of success businessman in the world. He had an early interest in software and began programming computers at the age of thirteen. In 1973, Bill Gates became a student at Harvard University. Within a year, Bill Gates dropped out from Harvard. Then he formed Microsoft. Now, Microsoft become the greatest software and technology developer factory in the world.
I prefer Bill Gates than other businessman because he is a hard worker, never give up, and always focus in his skills. And with his skills he can get much money, and he became famous people in this world. I hope I can be a successfull businessman like him and collect much money.
Work #4
Bill Gates
Bill Gates was born on October 28th, 1955 in Seattle in a family having rich business, political and community service background. Bill was the second of three children in an upper-middle class family. Bill Gates as a child was very competitive, curious, and depth thinker. His parents decided to enroll him in the private preparation school, Lakeside School.Bill Gates is one of richest men in the world. Bill Gates was the founder and first chairmen of Microsoft, a global software developer and Internet technology provider.
I knew him because everyone talking about him. And I have read a book about him. And I'm sure that everyone know him because Bill Gates is the one of success businessman in the world. He had an early interest in software and began programming computers at the age of thirteen. In 1973, Bill Gates became a student at Harvard University. Within a year, Bill Gates dropped out from Harvard. Then he formed Microsoft. Now, Microsoft become the greatest software and technology developer factory in the world.
I prefer Bill Gates than other businessman because he is a hard worker, never give up, and always focus in his skills. And with his skills he can get much money, and he become famous people in this world. I hope I can be a success businessman like him and collect much money.
WORK#3
For group 13.
Sentence 2 please pay attention for the adverb of time in second sentence. I think that "at 7.30 p.m. tonight" refers to future tense. So, you can replace it with "now".
Sentence 3 you should add "s" in the "game" word because you wrote "some" in that sentence.
Sentence 4 it would be better if you change "come" to "came". Remember for the verb which is used in simple past.
Sentence 6 it is a good sentence. unfortunately, I can't catch the meaning of the sentence. It is an ambiguity sentence.
Sentence 2 please pay attention for the adverb of time in second sentence. I think that "at 7.30 p.m. tonight" refers to future tense. So, you can replace it with "now".
Sentence 3 you should add "s" in the "game" word because you wrote "some" in that sentence.
Sentence 4 it would be better if you change "come" to "came". Remember for the verb which is used in simple past.
Sentence 6 it is a good sentence. unfortunately, I can't catch the meaning of the sentence. It is an ambiguity sentence.
WORK#2
We are students of State University of Semarang.
We always come to the campus at 7 o'clock.
Today is Tuesday. We are studying tax accounting.
Yesterday was Monday. We studied English for Economic.
Miss Uut asked us to do our exercises.
We submitted the exercises on her table, after we had finished it.
Miss Uut was walking when we submitted our exercises on her table.
We always come to the campus at 7 o'clock.
Today is Tuesday. We are studying tax accounting.
Yesterday was Monday. We studied English for Economic.
Miss Uut asked us to do our exercises.
We submitted the exercises on her table, after we had finished it.
Miss Uut was walking when we submitted our exercises on her table.
Work 1
hello guys,
last week, I learned about some words that relate to the business. I also learned to write about my dream, I think it is difficult, I thought was right in fact there were many tenses that incorect.
for grammar, I still confused when writing paragraf use past tenses, and I felt difficult to arrange words to be a good sentences.
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