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REVISED WORK #2

By : Unknown
1   Simple Present Tenses
F : We often see flora and fauna program on TV.
T : We often see flora and fauna programs on TV.

      Present Continuous Tense
F : They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurants at 7.30 p.m tonight.
T : They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurant at 7.30 p.m tonight.

3  Simple Past Tense
F : We ate delicious snack and played some game last night.
T : We ate delicious snack and played some games last night

    Past Continuous Tense
F : She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you come here.
T : She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you came here.

Past Perfect Tense
T : Vita’s family had prepared her birthday for a week.

    Present Perfect Continuous Tense
F :  had been helping me when they went to school.
T : She has been helping me when they went to school.


REVISED WORK#2

By : Unknown
Feedback : 
- It would be better if you add a title on each sentence, making it easier to be corrected.
- "We are students of the State University of Semarang"
According to me, You should not use the "s" at the Student, because the subject is the "We".

Thank you for all correction. I forget to add a title on each sentence, and i will give it. But, for sentence "We are students of the State University of Semarang" I think is correct. Because, "we" are plurar so I think we have to add "s" at word "student (Noun)".

1. Simple Present Tense
We are students of State University of Semarang.
We always come to the campus at 7 o'clock.
2. Simple Present Continuous Tense
Today is Tuesday. We are studying tax accounting.
3. Simple Past Tense
Yesterday was Monday. We studied English for Economic.
Miss Uut asked us to do our exercises.
4. Past Perfect Tense
We submitted the exercises on her table, after we had finished it.
5. Past Perfect Continuous Tense
Miss Uut was walking when we submitted our exercises on her table.














REVISED WORK #4

By : Unknown
Bill Gates


Bill Gates was born on October 28th, 1955 in Seattle in a family having rich business, political and community service background. Bill was the second of three children in an upper-middle class family. Bill Gates as a child was very competitive, curious, and depth thinker. His parents decided to enroll him in the private preparation school, Lakeside School. Bill Gates is one of  richest men in the world. Bill Gates was the founder and first chairmen of Microsoft, a global software developer and Internet technology provider. 

I knew him because everyone talking about him. And I have read a book about him. And I'm sure that everyone know him because Bill Gates is the one of success businessman in the world. He had an early interest in software and began programming computers at the age of thirteen. In 1973, Bill Gates became a student at Harvard University. Within a year, Bill Gates dropped out from Harvard. Then he formed Microsoft. Now, Microsoft become the greatest software and technology developer factory in the world.

I prefer Bill Gates than other businessman because he is a hard worker, never give up, and always focus in his skills. And with his skills he can get much money, and he became famous people in this world. I hope I can be a successfull businessman like him and collect much money.

Revised #Work 4

By : Unknown



                                                         Eka Tjipta Widjaja




            Eka Tjipta Widjaja is one of Indonesian successful entrepreneurs. He is the 3rd richest man in Indonesia with total assets ± 8 billion US dollars. But who would have thought, he just graduated from elementary school.
Here's his story.

Eka was born in China on October 3, 1923. He was a son of a poor family. He moved to Makassar in 1932 with his mother when he was 9 years old. Arrived in Makassar,  He helped his father -who had already arrived- which has a small shop there. Eka has working in his father's store in order to get 150 dollars to pay off the debt to the moneylenders. After two years, the debt was paid off. When the debt was paid off Eka also asked to be sent to elementary school. Graduated from elementary school, he didn’t continue  his education due to economic problems. Then he began selling candy, biscuits, and other items from his father's store around Makassar by bike.
            Slowly but surely, he started his first business. From selling used bike, he had bought a pedicab to help his business.  But, when his business started to grew, the Japanese came to Indonesia, including Makassar. So that his efforts were completely destroyed immediately. Eka was unemployed. Nothing merchandise that could be sold. Total profit which he collected over several years, fully spent for daily needs.
            In 1980, Eka decided to continue his business and became an entrepreneur. He established CV Sinar Mas that have exported agricultural products and imported textile. Then, he bought oil palm plantations area about ​​ten thousand hectares in Riau and a factory with capacity of 60 thousand tons of palm oil. Because the business grew rapidly, in 1981 he decided to buy 1000 hectares of tea plantations area and a factory with a capacity of 20 thousand tons of tea. After established oil palm and tea factory, Eka started his business in banking sector. He bought Bank  International Indonesia with assets of about 13 billion rupiah. Under his leadership, the bank grew very fast . Eka successfully managed the bank that originally only had two branches into a bank with assets of 9.2 trillion rupiah and has forty branches.

             In 2006, Eka also established Eka Tjipta Foundation (ETF),  a nonprofit organization  with the motto "
good deeds create good seeds", the organization focuses on the social and cultural, empowerment and development, local economy, and environmental conservation. This organization has a variety of programs, such as ETF Narrative, Mediation Training and Scholarship.
Now, after his companies is managed by his son, Eka more spent his days doing social activities, meet with old friends and occasionally go to Singapore for treatment. The only position he still hold is the Chairman of Eka Tjipta Foundation (ETF).

It has been more than 50 years in business, Eka admitted that his success can't be separated from the support of his family. Now he can reap what he earned in his life. Business experience proves that hard work will never betray us. 




Revised Work#2

By : Unknown


1.      Simple Present Tenses
We often see flora and fauna program on TV.
We often see flora and fauna programs on TV.

2.      Present Continuous Tense
They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurants at 7.30 p.m tonight.
They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurant at 7.30 p.m tonight.

3.      Simple Past Tense
We ate delicious snack and played some game last night.
We ate delicious snack and played some games last night

4.      Past Continuous Tense
She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you come here.
She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you came here.

5.      Past Perfect Tense
Vita’s family had prepared her birthday for a week.

6.      Present Perfect Continuous Tense
She had been helping me when they went to school.
She has been helping me when they went to school.

work#4

By : Unknown
HARY TANOESOEDEBJO

     Hary Tanoesoedebjo was born in Surabaya,September 26 1965 and now he age 49 years old.He was a businessman and political figure from Indonesia.Hary is the owner of MNC Group.In the political field,he is the founder and Chairman of the Partai Perindo.He never joined the Partai Nasden and Partai Hanura. Hary currently holds saveral strategic  positions in various leading companies in Indonesia. The addition,the current Hary also held various positions at other companies under the banner Global Mediacom and Bhakti Investama.
     He has repeatedly been a speaker at various seminars and a guest lecturer in the areas of Corporate Finance,Investment,and Strategic Management for master programs in various Universities.
     In 2011,forbes released a list on the richest people in Indonesia,Hary was ranked 22nd with a total wealth of US $ 1,19 billion.
     His career was not just stop there,he event served as treasurer of Indonesian National Sports Committee or the abbreviated of KONI.He was diving all with enormoust ability.Hary is known enterprising and skilled.Besides intelligence was able to bring into the ranks of important people in Indonesia.Her management capabilities make it capable of running great role in various companies that he owns so that all companies can run well and organized.
     Of the various companies that he had he manages to be a millionaire to be reckoned with and is seen by other businessman.For that reason he is often presented as speaker to variouse seminars to channel capabilities businesses of Indonesia.In achieving success,he has four keys which is focused with the aim,praying,build good character,and discipline for commitment.
     On July 2,2013 Hary elected as vise President of Hanura accompany Wiranto.Chairman's advisory Council Hanura plunge into politics because concerns.Corruption,low enforcement,education and social inequality is still slow.
     After discussion with Wiranto,he admitted to having the same vision and mission to build Indonesia according to the potential for developing Indonesia.To serve the people of Indonesia in other to change for the better.Meanwhile,according to Saleh Husin,Secretary General Hanura,Hary chosen because he has a good image,not only in Indonesia but also in the world.



Work 4

By : Unknown
Hello friends ...
I'm Septiana, I was born on September 28th 1996, in Pati.
I want to tell you about my dreams.
Since I was a child, I have several dreams that always change. Now, I have dreams that I really want to reach.
I study in University state of Semarang. I want to graduate on time about three years start from now. I want to be an Accountant, because I take accounting major and I want to be a businesswoman as the second job. I choose a businesswoman as the second job because that's interesting job.
To make my dreams come true, start from now I should study hard, I will do the best for my self, my family, and other people. I also pray to my God, in order to God gives me easiness and guidance. Amien.
I think that's all from me, thanks for your attention friends. :)

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