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Hello friends ...
I'm Septiana, I was born on September 28th 1996, in Pati.
I want to tell you about my dreams.
Since I was a child, I have several dreams that always change. Now, I have dreams that I really want to reach.
I study in University state of Semarang. I want to graduate on time about three years start from now. I want to be an Accountant, because I take accounting major and I want to be a businesswoman as the second job. I choose a businesswoman as the second job because that's interesting job.
To make my dreams come true, start from now I should study hard, I will do the best for my self, my family, and other people. I also pray to my God, in order to God gives me easiness and guidance. Amien.
I think that's all from me, thanks for your attention friends. :)
Sabtu, 25 April 2015
Hi Septi :), Good night
BalasHapusI will give you feedback in your work.
“I study in University State of Semarang”. I think it will be better if you change that sentence with “At this moment, I study in University State of Semarang”. So, it will be distinct.
Thank you :)
This is my feedback Septi, please give your feedback in my posting too. :)
BalasHapusI have several dreams that always change(you must write your word with "changed" because it happen in the past). Thank you.
Okay, thank you Devi
BalasHapusThank you Lintang :)