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Sabtu, 25 April 2015
Mark Eliot Zuckerber or better known as Mark Zuckerberg was born in White
Plains, New York USA, on May 14, 1984. Son of Edward and Karen Zuckerberg. He was the second of four
children. He
along with his three sisters namely Randi, Donna and Arielle grew up in Dobbs
Ferry, New York. Mark
is a computer programmer, a businessman in the United States, and founder of a
social networking site that is very popular today, name is Facebook.com.
Since childhood Zuckerberg likes fiddling with the computer, try a variety of computer programs and learn to make it. When Mark was still in junior high school, he began to learn about programming and father also supported.
Since childhood Zuckerberg likes fiddling with the computer, try a variety of computer programs and learn to make it. When Mark was still in junior high school, he began to learn about programming and father also supported.
Mark Zuckerberg was a student at Harvard University where he first made a social networking system for college friends. After some time it turns out that social networking was originally created specifically for friends in college turned out favored by students from other universities, this is the beginning of the establishment of Facebook.com.
Mark and some friends tried to develop projects facebook, until they leave college in order to focus on the project. With hard work and unyielding finally they got investors to facebook development costs.
Facebook eventually grow very rapidly, the number of members on Facebook is increasing every day. In 2010 Mark Zuckerberg listed as the youngest self-made billionaire. He is a young endeavor is extraordinary. Mark is one of the world's great examples of young entrepreneurs.
Mark never is visiting Indonesia precisely in Borobudur in Magelang, Central Java, and will meet with a number of parties to discuss Internet.org in Jakarta. Mark also expressed interest in cooperating with the government in the health and education sectors.
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BalasHapusI think, your sentence incorrect
He along with his three sisters namely Randi, Donna and Arielle grew up in Dobbs Ferry, New York.
I think, you should use sentence:
He lived with his three sisters, those are:Randi, Donna and Arielle grew up in Dobbs Ferry, New York.
I'm sorry, if my feedback not true.
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BalasHapusThanks for your feedback fi :)
Hello Rica. I am Farida Nur Istiqomah and let me give you some feedback.
BalasHapusMark and some friends tried to develop projects facebook, until they leave (left) college in order to focus on the project.
With hard work and unyielding (,) finally they got investors to facebook development costs.
He is a young endeavor is extraordinary ( He is a young and extraordinary entrepreneur). Thanks and please give me feedback too :-)