Writing Project C

NO	Error Type
A	VERB TENSE
	Soeharto had been elected as a president of Indonesia for 32 years. -	Soeharto was elected as a president of Indonesia in 1965.
	He had visited that place twice.	He has visited the place twice.
	-         She had changed to be better woman.	She has changed to be a better woman.
	BBM increase Rp.7200,-  now	BBM is increasing  Rp.7200,-  now.
	Public Transportation price is Rising cause BBM price is increasing	Public Transportation price is rising because the increase of BBM price.
	Yesterday, Mantu Lanang Market Given discount for buy over 100k	Yesterday, Mantu Lanang Market gave.....
	Last year, Mr. SBY had increased price of fuel	Last year, Mr. SBY increased price of fuel.
	Yesterday, My Shop had opened for first day	Yesterday, My Shop opened for first day.
	That Shop had Given Discount yesterday	That shop gave discount yesterday.
	My Mother was Buying fruits when i looking for her	My Mother was buying fruits while I was looking for her.
	I was Studying English when my friend playing a games	I was studying English while my friend was playing games.
	Price Laptop increased cause value rupiah decreased	Price of Laptop increased because value rupiah had decreased.
	I studied accounting for almost 3 years in vocational high school.	I have studied accounting for almost 3 years in vocational high school.
	Mr. Jussuf kalla has been visited china to discussion about economy area  for 3 days	Mr. Jussuf Kalla has visited China to discuss about economy area  for 3 days.
B	SENTENCE STRUCTURE
	Netherland monopolyed the economy indonesia	Netherland monopolied the economy of Indonesia in 1940s.
	I’m meeting now.	I’m having a meeting now.
	Mugi and Rudi were selling together in Economics Faculty at 5 o’clock last evening.	Mugi and Rudi sold Tahu Bakso together in Economics Faculty at 5 o’clock last evening.
	Housewives was scream when food prices rise.	Housewives were screaming when food prices rose.
	Her business keep growing and now the stocks of PT Martina Berto is had by Martha and her family.	Her business keeps growing and now the stocks of PT Martina Berto are owned by Martha and her family.
	Martha Tilaar has good work ethos, always think positive, never give up and always make an inovation for her product	Martha Tilaar has good work ethos, always thinks positive, never gives up, and always makes an innovation for her product.
	he figure of a young woman from Indonesia who success as a young motivator and as an entrepreneur and writer to the international world	She is a figure of a young woman from Indonesia who is successful as a young motivator and as an entrepreneur and a writer at international world.
	We need to learn english because learning english is the important thing for us in this global world especially of those seeking job.	We need to learn English because learning English is important thing for us in this global world especially for those seeking job.
	She is from demak	She is from Demak.
	I was reading economic macro in the library when the rained.	I was reading economic macro in the library when it rained.
	“i”	I
	Traveling	Travelling (British), Traveling (US).