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Selasa, 31 Maret 2015
good morning
I want to give some comments for our assignment especially in grammar
For
group 6
1.
I was sleeping when
my mother was cooking yesterday.
This sentence should be “ I was sleeping while my
mother was cooking yesterday”
For group 9
1.
Fauzy had sent me a email before he
called yesterday.
This
sentence should be use “an” , so the
sentence is “ fauzy had sent me an email before he called yesterday.
For group 10
1.
He was washing his car while his
assistant cleaned his garden.
ð
He was washing his
car while his assistant was cleaning his garden
2.
Vitta was making some cakes while her
mother went to the market.
ð
Vitta was making
some cakes while her mother was going to the market
3.
I
was recording supplies inventory while my partner moved this car to the
parking area.
ð
I was recording supplies
inventory when my partner moved this car to the parking area
For group 13
1.
They
are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurants at 7.30 p.m
tonight.
ð
You should not use “s”
in the word of “restaurants” because you just have a dinner in one place, the
correct word is “restaurant”
2.
We ate delicious snack and played some game last
night.
ð We ate delicious snack and played
some games last night , cause it is plural so you should add “s”
3.
She
was reding a Novel with me in the teracce, when you come here.
ð She was reading a novel with me in
the teracce , when you came here , because it is
past tense (when you came here) you should use verb 2 “came”
