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Posted by : Unknown Jumat, 03 April 2015

Hello everybody, I will give some coments for our previous task(WORK#2).

1. For group 13

  • She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you come (came) here.
("when" sentence is followed by past tenses).
  • They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurants at 7.30 p.m tonight.
if they visit a seafood restaurant do not more than once, the word seafood restourants does not needs to add the "s" behind it (singular noun) and "PM" is stands for "Post-Meridiem", which means "after noon". the correct way to write it  is: "7.30 p.m." (p point m point).

2. For group 14 

  • We were starting our business while the other team also was starting their business.
    it would be better if it was written by:
     we were starting our business while the other team was starting their business too.


    Thankyou :-)
    And I'm sorry miss, i can't post this task with my email account (Farida.nur.istiqomah9@gmail.com). Probably because my email is doesn't registered to this blog, so please invite my email miss. thankyou :-)

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  1. Hi, fafa..
    well, i just want to give a correction for this sentence :..my email is doesn't registered..
    Maybe you lose , but it should be :..my email is not registered yet...
    :)

    BalasHapus

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