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Jumat, 03 April 2015
Hello, Friends .
In this post, I will give an opinion on the task that we have made on the work 2.
For groups 15, It would be better if you write a title for each sentence which you have created to be easy for the readers to understand.
I will give opinions to the sentence "We submitted the exercises on her table, after we had finished it."
In my opinion, the sentence should be better like this. "We submitted the exercises on Miss Uut's table, after we had finished it.''
Because, if we use '' her table '' then the readers will be confused who's the table refers to.
Thank you :)