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Good evening guys. I want to give some feedback for our task last week, but before that I want to say sorry because my post is too late. 

Actually, the sentences are very good but I want to give some of my view about it.

Group 13

1.  Present Continuous Tense : I think the restaurants must be write without “s”, because we know that it is one restaurant .

2.  Past Continuous Tense : The word come must be replaced with verb 2 “came’, because it shows the interrupted action in the past.

 3.Present Perfect Continuous Tense   : This is Past perfect continuous tense, right?

Group 14

    1. Present Tense : Come at replaced with come to

Group 9

1.  Past Perfect and Past Tense : Fauzy had sent me a(n)  email before he called (me) yesterday.

Group 10

1. Past Continuous : I was recording supplies inventory while  my partner moved (was moving)  this car to the parking area. Because it is parallel actions.

2. Past Continuous : He was washing his car while his assistant cleaned  (was cleaning) his garden. Because it is parallel action.

3. Past Continuous :  Vitta was making some cakes while (when) her mother went to the market.

4. Past Perfect :

I had finished wrap up this candy two hours ago, so you can bring it to the warehouse. I think the sentences will be better if it is written like this, “ I had finished wrap up this candy two hours ago, before you brought  it to the warehouse.

Group 8

1. Present Continuous Tense :

He is typing letters  (by himself) because his secretary is on leave.

Group 6

1. Past Continuous Tense 

I was sleeping when  (while) my mother was cooking yesterday. Because it is parallel action. 

Group 4

1. Present Tense

I always washes (wash)  my face and brushes my teeth before going to bed. Washes must be replaced with “wash”, because “I” is followed by am or verb, and then (she, he, it ) is followed by is or verb+s/es. 

Group 3

1. Presnt Tense

1.       Indonesia Health Card from the President's program  provides free health insurance for the poor Indonesian.

This sentence is very complicated for me. Actually, we can write the sentence like that “ Kartu Indonesia Sehat provides free health insurance for poor people in Indonesia.

Group 1

1. Past Continuous Tense

Lina was studying English when (while)  her parents were cleaning the house. Because it is parallel action.