BILL GATES
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William Henry “Bill” Gates III or
commonly known as Bill Gates was born in Seatle, Washington on October 28,
1955. He is a business person well-known personal computer revolution in the
world. Forbes magazine ranked him between the richest people in the world.
He was ranked first from 1995 to 2009.
Bill was a smart kid, but he was
too full of spirit and tend to often have trouble in school. When he was 11 years old, his parent decided to send Bill Gates to Lakeside School. At Lakeside
that Bill Gates first introduced to the world of computer.
Through his efforts, he founded a
software company called Microsoft Corporation and be
successful. Bill Gates became a millionaire. In 1990, Bill Gates realesed the operating system that was very successful in the world market.
Bill Gates married with Mellinda
French on January 1, 1994 and have three children, Jennifer Katharine, Rory
John, and Phoebe Adele. Bill Gates is known for his
generosity. With his wife, he founded the charitable foundation named Bill and
Mellinda Gates Foundation from 2000. In 2013 the foundation with a wealth of
assets that can be carried out up to 34,6 billion dollars. Bill Gates also
stated that he would donate half of his fortune to charity.
I'am very amazed with him. There is nice example
about Bill Gates, though he is the richest man in the world, and also recognized as a person who has the high intelligence, Gates never
underestimate the learning process.
Gates still considers
important continuous learning. He also created the ritual for himself called as "Think Week". Every year, for a full week, Gates will
isolate themselves and spend the time to read the news, information or latest
books are close related to the world of computers, technology and
engineering. After that, he will think how to take advantage of the new
knowledge gained.
Nb: Perhaps this is all I can say about Bill Gates. Sorry if too short. I'am still learning. Please correct my writing. Thank You :)
Hello Sania, this is my feedback.
BalasHapus1. When he was 11 years old, his parent (s). You must use "s" because his parents are two.
2. He is a business person well-known personal computer revolution in the world. I think the formation of the word is incorrect, He is a well-known business person of personal computer revolution in the world.
3. Bill Gates married with Mellinda French on January 1 (st), 1994. Remember to use (st) because it is show the date of first so you must write it "1st".
4. There is nice example about Bill Gates, though (how about use "although") he is the richest man in the world.
It is a good writing Sania, and thanks to allow me recognize Bill Gates from your assignment. Thank you.
Thank you, Asri :)
BalasHapusHe is very inspiring, right? :D