Steve Jobs
Steve Jobs is a hugely inspirational figure with a million phenomenal work in the field of technology. He was born on February 24, 1955 in San Francisco, California, USA. He was born to married couples, Joanne Simpson Abdulfattah Jandali. His father is a Syrian national who came to America to study at a university in California. There, his father, a professor of political science met with Steve's mother.Steve's first career starts along with colleagues who is also a co-founder of Apple, Steve Wozniak. He and Wozniak worked together in a company engaged in the field of computer games Atari Inc. After obtaining sufficient capital and experience, in 1976 he and Wozniak founded Apple with the name of Apple Computer Co. Apple was originally headquartered in the former Steve's family garage in California.After the development period with his partner Steve finally managed to create the world's first personal computer called the Apple 1 that directly commercialized at a price of US $ 666.66, the price is quite expensive for the new device at the time. And after he was developing a tool kedunya is nicknamed the Apple II. Hence the name Steve began to be known and product sales of Apple II was very high even become a trend.As the rise in popularity of Apple products Steve and others, he decided to look for a new Apple leadership. Chosen John Sculley, former CEO of Pepsi-Cola became the new leader of Apple in 1983. Under kepimimpinan Sculley, Steve turns out not find harmony. Many things are not in line between the two until finally Steve decided to come out of Apple in 1985.Out of Apple, Steve set up a new company NeXT Computer is engaged in the development of computer software. NeXT Computer product is classified as very advanced at the time, but like some other products which fail Steve (Apple Lisa), it turns out advanced products offered by NeXT Computer was also less ogled market.But what is surprising is Apple instead bought NeXT Computer at a price of $ 402 million dollars, and automatically retract Steve to former company he had built it. upon his return to Apple, Steve shared his colleagues developed a computer with advanced technology that Macintosh is still developed by the brand Apple Mac.Entered a period of retirement, Steve's work even more phenomenal. We began to recognize the product of advanced music player multifunctional gadgets Ipad Ipod until he spend together Apple in 2010. Thanks to his work, many parties who called Steve as one of the best available technology engineer of the century
Hai, Rohmah :)
BalasHapusI want to give feedback to the sentence still gaps in your writing.
"And after he was developing a tool kedunya is nicknamed the Apple II."
Maybe you can write "And after he was developing a second tool called the Apple II."
"Under kepimimpinan Sculley, Steve.."
You can write "Under leadership Sculley.."
And the last one you just need to add a "." after "century"
Give me your feedback too. Thank you :)
Hai sania :)
HapusTQ for your feedback, haha
that's very help me to more thorough ,
anything else, sania ?
Haha nothing Rohmah. Thank you :)
Hapusur welcome sania :D
HapusHi Rohmah, let me give feedback too,
BalasHapus1. He was born on February 24, 1955 in San Francisco, California, USA. (you have forgotten to use "th" after number 24)
2. NeXT Computer (maybe, your mean was Next computer)
Thank you Rohmah :)
hai koerint..
Hapussame with sania. TQ for ur feedback..
okay for statemn. no. 1 u right, thq has reminded me
but for no. 2 ur analized is wrong. 'NeXT' is not typing error. that is really name of Company, you have to read once again.. but of all, TQ so much. anything else kurnia?
Hai Kurnia, I think NeXT computer is product of Steve Jobs?
BalasHapusWhat do you think , Rohmah?
Almost true Sania, but the truth, 'NeXT Computer is a Company. it engaged in the development of computer software.. come on, read once again. that's so funny to read it :D
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